For a first draft, this is excellent. The photography and the editing of the photos are of a high quality. The photographs alone make it convincing as a real life magazine. I think the title works and there is a sense of a brand. However, my slight concern is that , although I recognise it's a music and lifestyle magazine, there's not enough emphasis on the music. Next steps: - You need more text on your front cover. The image, particularly with the lights on the guitar (is there any way the editing could make them look like they're on??), is a good one. Perhaps experiment with it in colour too and get some feedback on what your target audience prefers. - The contents looks very professional but it does look like a lifestyle magazine. Could you make the images more music based? Some excellent work here though, Niamh. Keep going, your work shows great promise! Mrs Waller.
For a first draft, this is excellent. The photography and the editing of the photos are of a high quality. The photographs alone make it convincing as a real life magazine. I think the title works and there is a sense of a brand. However, my slight concern is that , although I recognise it's a music and lifestyle magazine, there's not enough emphasis on the music.
ReplyDeleteNext steps:
- You need more text on your front cover. The image, particularly with the lights on the guitar (is there any way the editing could make them look like they're on??), is a good one. Perhaps experiment with it in colour too and get some feedback on what your target audience prefers.
- The contents looks very professional but it does look like a lifestyle magazine. Could you make the images more music based?
Some excellent work here though, Niamh. Keep going, your work shows great promise!
Mrs Waller.